Editing The Gallery
It had been over two years since I completed the first draft of this story. I looked at it again and, apart from a few tiny edits, I felt that the story needed some further episodes inside the gallery. I've added one further room, amplifying the themes covered by the remainder of the story and, though the story is still short, I think that it seems more complete now. The added section increases the story by 282 words. Here are the drafts:
A file showing the edits between draft one and two
16 Februray 2011
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