Editing further: Samuel Pam’s Salvation
It had been two years and seven months since I first completed this story, and one year and two months since I last edited the story. I again looked at it and did two further rounds of editing. This time I managed to reduce its length by a further 773 words.
A file showing the edits between drafts1-2
28 October 2010
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